Request Battlefield 1 Montage for review?

[KingKILLER2oo]

Any feedback is good, was talked into doing one by a friend who had made one and wanted to go head to head as a friendly competition! Thanks to anyone willing to help out, yes we already compared and was wondering if I could improve on anything Thanks!

 

[Dead Walker]

Left a comment on your video. Thought the montage was great. Excellent job with the Cuts and transitions.

 

[KingKILLER2oo]

Left a comment on your video. Thought the montage was great. Excellent job with the Cuts and transitions.

Yea I replied not knowing you posted here as well haha, but thanks for the feedback and I'm glad you liked it and that the video looks good.

 

[Xellius]

nice editing i did like the video (i even watched it full! - and thats rare)

so now to the things i didnt really like ^^

the slowmotions - killed the mood little bid

the smoke-effects they cover to much of the center of the screen
which prevents the gameplay to be seen clearly
otherwise they are nice / look cool

give the video a nice thumbnail
the thumbnail atm dosnt look bad
but just king killer dosnt really fit

more description^^