Request Channel Introduction Review

[SolidScout]

Hello everyone,

I wanted to ask you what do you think about my introduction video?Should I change something so that I could make it better,what are your first impressions of it?

Thank you for all the feedback in advance.

 

[SlenderSlay]

You sound a little robotish, but otherwise great!

 

[SolidScout]

You sound a little robotish, but otherwise great!

Thanks for the feedback,about the robotic voice hmm,i guess i'll have to try and think of how to fix it.

 

[SlenderSlay]

Thanks for the feedback,about the robotic voice hmm,i guess i'll have to try and think of how to fix it.

Just try putting more emotion into your voice

 

[SnazzyGaming]

You should have maybe added multiple game-plays not just CSGO! I feel like that would show people that its not going to be just CSGO on your channel and it gives them a feel of what games are to come! Also maybe add some hype? You sound really chill and dooowwwnn. All the big youtubers i watch out there has lots of energy!

 

[SolidScout]

Just try putting more emotion into your voice

guess i've got some practice to do

 

[SolidScout]

You should have maybe added multiple game-plays not just CSGO! I feel like that would show people that its not going to be just CSGO on your channel and it gives them a feel of what games are to come! Also maybe add some hype? You sound really chill and dooowwwnn. All the big youtubers i watch out there has lots of energy!

Ok,I'll take your advice about not just one game footage and I guess your second point is the same as SlenderSlay's,thanks for the feedback!