Check out DJ Wrighty Simple 2D Introduction 2016

[ProAidenHD]

You all should know by now that I love showcasing my work. If you don't showcase your work, you'll most likely get nowhere.
Now that I've got that off of my chest. I'd like to present to you a simple 2D introduction/ident I designed for a friend who's a DJ.
All assets you witness in the intro/ident, were all designed by myself such as the official logo, clean backdrop but the sound is from my friend and the DJ himself.
Anyways, I know it's just a simple 2D intro but I would love to see if I can get any feedback/constructive criticism

 

[Deleted member 86350]

feel the timing is a bit off... yep, that's it. Everything else... great job.

 

[ProAidenHD]

feel the timing is a bit off... yep, that's it. Everything else... great job.

Thankyou for the postive feedback and constructive criticism, I agree that the timing is abit off. I will have more focus on the timing management on future projects.

 

[scorpionvongaming]

Simple but classy thumps up.

 

[taab]

its good nice and simple

 

[Xellius]

i do like it too
but i have always the feeling the first few words are not that good
compared to the soundquality of the musictrack wich comes directly after it
it sound for me at start like mono and then switch to stereo
another thing the picture in the vido looks little bid unsharp (fullscreen)

 

[CakeLikesPie]

You all should know by now that I love showcasing my work. If you don't showcase your work, you'll most likely get nowhere.
Now that I've got that off of my chest. I'd like to present to you a simple 2D introduction/ident I designed for a friend who's a DJ.
All assets you witness in the intro/ident, were all designed by myself such as the official logo, clean backdrop but the sound is from my friend and the DJ himself.
Anyways, I know it's just a simple 2D intro but I would love to see if I can get any feedback/constructive criticism

You should work on the curves in ae and make it smoother, they it moved was very weird.