Request Constructive criticism

[SalimRabhi11]

Hey guys! First of all thanks for taking your time to read this tread and possibly reviewing my videos!
Basically I want to improve the quality of my videos content related. I can't do anything about quality just yet but that's my number one priority! Anyways! Here is the link, https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCnM9FTPzvJUCwRShykfwipw, get reviewing!! Thanks again! Also if you enjoy the content please hit the like button and subscribe to see future videos! You wouldn't want to miss my 1,000 subscriber special!! And Thanks! Again...

 

[fattmat]

Hey guys! First of all thanks for taking your time to read this tread and possibly reviewing my videos!
Basically I want to improve the quality of my videos content related. I can't do anything about quality just yet but that's my number one priority! Anyways! Here is the link, https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCnM9FTPzvJUCwRShykfwipw, get reviewing!! Thanks again! Also if you enjoy the content please hit the like button and subscribe to see future videos! You wouldn't want to miss my 1,000 subscriber special!! And Thanks! Again...

Telling people to subscribe and like your videos, tend to put off a feeling of "I want you just for views". Maybe try enticing people to watch your videos with other efforts side from directly telling them what to do. For your thumbnails, having a stronger font choice with a black outline will stand out more too ^^