Critique my first few videos? (Mostly Gaming)

[Daz Popert]

not sure if i'm aloud to link multiple videos to critique but i haven't been on here in a bit so i need to catch up >_< .

Intro Video (scripted) -

First Commentary (live) -

Second Commentary (live) -

Rap (>_<) -

Go as harsh as you want! one thing i know is that i need to fix my render settings.

 

[Nightcover]

Hey, I watched your intro. Your intro is very well done and gives good information about what your channel is about. The annotation in the end has no link so it is not possible to actually click it and go to your first video.

Your Pokemon rap tag is hilarious.

Your Smash video is also great and I liked your commentary.

How did you get 129 subscribers in 1 week if I might ask? Did you have an audience already?

 

[Daz Popert]

Hey, I watched your intro. Your intro is very well done and gives good information about what your channel is about. The annotation in the end has no link so it is not possible to actually click it and go to your first video.

Your Pokemon rap tag is hilarious.

Your Smash video is also great and I liked your commentary.

How did you get 129 subscribers in 1 week if I might ask? Did you have an audience already?

Thanks! Fixed the link and also i had a previous channel with 1k I'm also in a skype group with like a to of close friends and they just subbed.

 

[PunkJax]

Your stuff is pretty great! Good job!