First thing, good clips of what I can assume to be a few rounds of Mayhem and I liked the smooth flow from clip to clip. Second thing it is really hard to tell what is happening in a few points due to what ever filter or brightness setting you applied. Destiny is very bright and colorful game so it looks weird when it is darkened up the way you did. Lastly, I liked the song choice but the fact that it was a 6 minute song made a lot of the video feel a bit repetitive so it my be good to incorporate a song change and then switch up your subclass gameplay wise so a viewer won't be too jaded out by the 3 minute mark. That said, damn good Dawnblade-ing
If you feel like checking out one of my montages and giving some feedback that would be appreciated.