Hi guys this is my newest video I would appreciate if you could help me grow and mabey tell me whats wrong with my video thank you if possible could you pleas share this video on twitter that would be amazing.
Review4Review New Video Plz help need feedback
- Thread starter Donavon Hype
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It took you roughly 4 and a half mins before talking about set game...George Said you got to keep people watching this includes giving the people a account of whats going on roughly every 10 seconds...Cutsceens is good time to do so...Regardless when you get into the game you do great at staying to the moment 
With this being your first video of this series, introduce the game in a humerus way! I don't know something like... Hey guys, Donavon Hype here and today starts a new series where i will be venturing all the way back to the industrial revolution as an assassin! Something like that. Also when their are cut scenes in the game make sure to add your 2 cents! Great video buddy, keep it up!