Request please review my vlog channel

[derwinvlog]

please review my vlog channel and tell me what is needed to improve on it,,
heres the link to the channel https://www.youtube.com/user/derwinvlogs

 

[reece w]

first of all i liked the video it was a good review , a few tips if you can try to improve the quality of the video i know not everyone can get the equipment to so its cool but maybe swap out whatever you was using for a phone instead or something else , another thing was in you most recent video i couldn't really hear you that well so try to maybe speak a bit louder and and finally when youre struggling to like unbox stuff try to engage more like asking the audience how there days was stuff like that ect. but yeah cool product