Hello FredRs, I believe you should be more specific for this review, I would like to know what parts you would like reviewed, please do not reply with "just everything in general" or something around those terms. Thanks!
Art - I like the idea on the design of your channel art but I don't know if it relates to your videos as much as it should. The sizes could be better but I like the fact that your banner and profile picture match well. I also really like the font used.
The whole channel brand - I don't really know if you've found your unique brand yet but I do find your videos entertaining. The overall concept isn't too clear.
Audio - Honestly I don't know if theres a lot you could do for your mic quality as it is very clear. Really nice sound. Maybe add in some background music or enable game sound in your recordings?
Visual - Visual is nice, maybe a face cam? You may want to crop out the window bar at the top of the screen.
Use of description (properly described, social links, clickable links, human readable?) - Your desc makes sence but I don't think it covers a lot about the actual video. Maybe include the game name in the title of the video also. I didn't know what the game was until I saw it was runescape in the desc.
Use of tags - Good tags, related to your content
Do the videos meet the value proposition set by the title/description - Like I said the title wasn't clear to me so I think it could be improved.
All in all your channel has a lot of potential and I'm totally subscribing. Keep up the good work and make sure you share your video links EVERYWHERE xD
Well i don't know much about Runescape but your vocals were spot on and crystal clear so that's a positive. Also the channel art is really good as well. However can't really comment on commentary because i really don't know what stuff should be discussed while playing Runescape.
The only things i could say need a little work is Maybe a channel intro for your videos something that defines your channel. And an Outro clip those give your channel a much more professional look even something small can go along way. What are you using for Graphics editing and video editing?