Request Review the video please

[RichPlay8]

Hey, I did this video, can you review it please. You don't have to watch it all lol. but tell me how I did. my first big go at something this long.

 

[tippsy711]

Hey, I did this video, can you review it please. You don't have to watch it all lol. but tell me how I did. my first big go at something this long.

Hey man, It looks pretty amazing, you have good sound quality and nice videos. Plus I looked at your channel, and it's great! Keep it up dude

 

[RichPlay8]

Thanks, i enjoy making them but always worry that i didn't edit it well. but i;m always trying to improve