Request video review

[Dana Vaneck]

hey guys AFRODaMu5 here i was wondering if you could take a few minutes and check out my latest video ,i have been working on improving my channel (audio,intro,outro,gameplay) and think im making good progress,if you can give it a watch and tell me what you did/didnt like would be greatly appreciated thank you guys!!!!!!!

 

[Film Tech]

Some music in the intro would be nice But good content! Great commentary too!

 

[Dana Vaneck]

Some music in the intro would be nice But good content! Great commentary too!

thank you i added music to it and it really did help thanks for the feedback

 

[LW]

As said above, put some music into your intro. Also, you could add like 5 seconds of good kills or streaks or funny moments before the intro starts to get people to keep on watching your video. You did very well in the tags you added, but you might want to change the title to some more information (COD BO3 | Great start, exciting change | Channel Update or something like that).