Request What do you think of my editing ?

[Astinax]

Hello everybody ! Thanks for checking out this thread
I usually don't make many cuts in my videos, but I tried making a few cuts in my latest video in order to only keep the interesting parts in but not too much so that it still makes sense. I would definitely love to have some feedback on it ! Thank you

 

[fattmat]

Hello everybody ! Thanks for checking out this thread
I usually don't make many cuts in my videos, but I tried making a few cuts in my latest video in order to only keep the interesting parts in but not too much so that it still makes sense. I would definitely love to have some feedback on it ! Thank you

What's your target audience? Younger people tend to enjoy the cuts more, because they'll stay interested with the fluidity of your talking. If you're shooting for the older crowd, they might get a little overwhelmed. Honestly though, it's good that you manage to talk throughout the video, I checked the first two minutes, and other random bits. I'd say you're managing well ^^

 

[Astinax]

What's your target audience? Younger people tend to enjoy the cuts more, because they'll stay interested with the fluidity of your talking. If you're shooting for the older crowd, they might get a little overwhelmed. Honestly though, it's good that you manage to talk throughout the video, I checked the first two minutes, and other random bits. I'd say you're managing well ^^

Thank you !! I am targeting people around 14-16 years old. I'll definitely keep with these cuts then ^^

 

[fattmat]

Thank you !! I am targeting people around 14-16 years old. I'll definitely keep with these cuts then ^^

Thanks for listening and taking my feedback into consideration ^^ You'll figure out a system for what works best, and if anyone else manages to mention it in the future, you should be good.

 

[H20Dynamo]

No complaints really, anything I could say is subjective. I think the cut com actually works pretty nice. I think its funny how the old call of duty commentary style is coming to other games

 

[Astinax]

No complaints really, anything I could say is subjective. I think the cut com actually works pretty nice. I think its funny how the old call of duty commentary style is coming to other games

Hahaha yeah it's true, CoD is a bit on the downfall but this style of video is pretty popular