Request Review of revised channel trailer!

[SirPlasmalot]

I've been receiving a lot of criticism about my visual appeal in the channel, so I updated the channel trailer. I would appreciate anyone willing to tell me if it "sells" the channel! Thanks so much in advance.

 

[406 GamerZ]

I love it....is cheesy yet very attractive. I've also subbed to your channel.

 

[Marc Towler]

Definitely would say it is cheesy, it isn't too bad but there are a couple of point where the voice over is drowned out by the sound. I think overall it is quite suitable

 

[SirPlasmalot]

I love it....is cheesy yet very attractive. I've also subbed to your channel.

Oh wow, thank you lol! I hope that it has an aura of invitation, my channel is all about lighthearted energy.

 

[SirPlasmalot]

Definitely would say it is cheesy, it isn't too bad but there are a couple of point where the voice over is drowned out by the sound. I think overall it is quite suitable

Ugh, I know. It was already uploading by the time I realized it. Do you think it would be worth it to re-edit the sound, re-export it, and re-upload it? Or is that too minute of a detail?

 

[406 GamerZ]

It always good to go back and retouch but that's just my opinion.

 

[Marc Towler]

It would definitely be worth the retouch as it is a lil annoying but im picky like that

 

[SirPlasmalot]

I did retouch it, and I'm glad I did. Thanks, all of you!